August 2, 2003
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Creamy white skin
Atop ivory sheets
Her body and soul exhausted
From the lonely day to daySatin black hair
Fans across her pillow
She lays her head to rest
In wistful wait of his callUnable to sleep
In her empty bed
Without the sound
Of his masculine voice
Wishing her good night
And sweet dreamsHe is
The very beat of her heartChoices must be made
Will tonight be the night?He gauges each step
Which road must he choose?
So little to offer
So much to lose
Caught for now
Between love and sin
He just can't break
Her heart again
So he takes the road
He knows too well
Sparing the life she has made
From his personal hellChoices must be made
Tonight is the nightOn the tear stained pillow
She finally closes her eyes
As the very beat of her heartStops
Comments (14)
Hey.....
I like the style of your writing....I can relate to it. Keep writing, I'll probably be checking in!
~Propz~
wow i love the poem! well props!
thats nice.
thats awesome.......very dark and dramatic.........my type of writing........
peace, love, and cactuses
~MJ
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wow.. that was a wonderful poem! i really can relate to it! you are a beautiful writer!
<3 kristen
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that was one grate poem...keep rite'n...PROPS...
*Kahlua*
i LiKE THA P0EM... PR0PS! H0LLA BACKK
The weeping eyes, The sound of eternal torture, The heart slowly beating to an end, But the head stays up and the mind stays clear, the path will come, the light will shine.. oiii poems are a passionate desire of my own.. i lvoe poems soo very much everything about it..and your poems are amazing ! you got real talent sounds like each and every word comes form deeep inside your soul..it finds its way to express itself in calming words but very deep and meaningful ways..i am veyr attached to your poems ..id like to ashare some of my poems with u hehehe... ttyl
Jus' browzin' xanga's.. Nice poem..
THIS POEM IS REALLY GOOD. i love it so much.
-AMY
Great imagery. Beautiful layout. I love the way "he is the very beat of her heart" and then "the very beat of her heart stops." A clever unexpectedly worded conclusion. Bravo, dear.
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